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Wonder by ~someonekrazy69:iconsomeonekrazy69:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Narrative > Open


Every day you see me in the halls and ask me if I am ok… I stare into your blank non- caring eyes, and simply nod my head yes and you walk away. What’s wrong with you can’t you see? I’m not ok I am dying inside. I cry myself to sleep every night and slit my wrists, trying to die. I hide my self in my black disguise. You see me in the halls and pretend to care some times but you don’t want to take the time out of your life to be my friend. So I continue to live my life this way. Until one day you don’t see me in my usual spot in the hall and you wonder what has happened to me. You hear rumors and wonder if they are true… they are, I went to far and cut to deep. You begin to wonder what it would have been like if you just tried to be my friend really tried to care, and then you begin to realize, maybe that’s all I really needed… a friend…
©2007-2009 ~someonekrazy69
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Author's Comments

i hope that you guys don't think that i am to depressing lol...

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~bubblegum17 Oct 14, 2007, 7:15:33 PM
:cries: that's soooo sad! omg, tabbi, this is awesome, i'm faving it!!! :hug:

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"Smelly cat, smelly cat, what are they feeding you? Smelly cat, smelly cat, it's not your fault!" -Phoebe, Friends
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~someonekrazy69 Oct 14, 2007, 7:23:57 PM
aww thax jess i feel so special! i hope its no to emo
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~bubblegum17 Oct 14, 2007, 7:52:01 PM
nah... okay, it is... but not like omg type emo.. just a little but it's a good emo! if that makes sense :?

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"Smelly cat, smelly cat, what are they feeding you? Smelly cat, smelly cat, it's not your fault!" -Phoebe, Friends
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~someonekrazy69 Oct 14, 2007, 7:57:44 PM
your jess you never made sense so ya it makes sense to me lol
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~thelightthatfades Oct 14, 2007, 8:26:56 PM
-huggles the poem- Nah, I've done worse. haha. I don't know why you think you're such a terrible poet. I think you're amazing.

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TLC: No Scrubs Allowed
I stole the pink fifties 'cause I'm a cheatin' whore.
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~bubblegum17 Oct 15, 2007, 11:53:10 AM
YAY :hug: :boogie: :strip:


yup, i stripped :D

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"Smelly cat, smelly cat, what are they feeding you? Smelly cat, smelly cat, it's not your fault!" -Phoebe, Friends
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=xArtisticAngelx Oct 28, 2007, 4:34:38 PM
This is sad, but I really like it.
I'm into these sort of things :S

:hug: :heart:

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~.:*{Amanda}*:.~

{¯`v´¯}
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨} ¸.·*¨}
{¸.·´ {¸.·´ .·´ ¸¸.·¨¯`·~

But you can skyrocket away from me,
& never come back if you find another galaxy;
Far from here with more room to fly,
Just leave me your stardust to remember you by.
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~someonekrazy69 Oct 29, 2007, 6:11:42 AM
sweet me to... this is one of my favorite poems of mine :D

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i live in my own haunted wonderland...

:licking:

I believe in Jesus Christ as my Savior. If you do copy and paste this in your signature.
:excited:
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=xArtisticAngelx Oct 29, 2007, 1:09:35 PM
Hehehe, coolies :3

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~.:*{Amanda}*:.~

{¯`v´¯}
.`·.¸.·´
¸.·´¸.·´¨} ¸.·*¨}
{¸.·´ {¸.·´ .·´ ¸¸.·¨¯`·~

But you can skyrocket away from me,
& never come back if you find another galaxy;
Far from here with more room to fly,
Just leave me your stardust to remember you by.
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